So I got my update for the contest game today. I advanced the story a good deal this week, though I do have one concern. The path you end up on the framing story is based on your choices in the substories but I am not sure if players will figure out what choices do what. There is a logic to it, but it is kind of subtle. I may rearrange some stories later as well to help make the themes more clear and fit together better but for now I am just getting all the stories out to advance as far as I can.
Anyway here is the update for this week.